Tori-G

I have completely re-edited The Girl in Red.. I haven't changed anything in the story, just moved a few things around so that it is one POV per chapter. Sadly, in doing this, the chapters are all different lengths, but it is so much easier to read now - I hope...

EssoLloydMpetha

Thanks for reading, voting and commenting on my book Imperium, much appreciated.
           

Tori-G

@EssoLloydMpetha you're welcome then!!
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EssoLloydMpetha

@EssoLloydMpetha I prefer comments more... it's always great receiving feedback on your book
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Tori-G

@EssoLloydMpetha you're very welcome! As for voting...  oops... I always forget to do that, because I get too in to reading the books... 
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LightenTheShadows

Thanks for the comments on "Spandex is Mandatory"! Some of your theories were incredibly interesting ;) Hope you enjoy, that you keep reading, that I see more of your votes and comments soon, and that you stay tuned :)

LightenTheShadows

Thanks for adding "Spandex is Mandatory" to your reading list! :)
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LightenTheShadows

Your thoughts are very interesting! Keep it up and I'd love to hear from you whenever you get some more theories ;) I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the book - and don't you worry your little butt about the votes! Votes are great sure, but I couldn't care less about them. All I want to hear is that you're enjoying - and the fact that you're so into the book just makes me smile :)
            
            Thanks again for reading and I hope you stay tuned! :)
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Tori-G

@LightenTheShadows you're very welcome! Sorry there have been no votes yet - I tend to forget to, because I'm in too much of a hurry to get to the next chapter, and sometimes don't even notice when I change chapters.. 
            
            I still don't think J is Stormtrooper though. Wheb you see how close they actually are, ST's reaction to her Aunt beating her, would have been worse, and she likely wouldn't have been able to stop him doing something about it. 
            As much as I'd like it to be Daniel, she has mentioned that ST is pretty short. So in my opinion, that rules out the 3 main males.. Or maybe I have to go back and re-read your descritions of them. Lol. 
            
            I KNOW I'll definitely have more as the story progresses :-D 
            
            I'm still sticking with Macy as Flux though.. Although, so probably would've done something about the pizza incident.. unless she had already gone back in time many times to try and get the part, and had just reached her frustration point where she gave up, by then.. lol
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OliverPrattAuthor

Hey there,
          Thank you for following me!
          I hope you'll like my silly little stories.
          Let me know!
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          Oliver

Tori-G

@PedanticAndGrumpy you're very welcome! 
            And I really am enjoying it! 
            Usually a story that jumps around like that would confuse me so much I'd have to stop.. But I can't! And I'm loving the characters already!
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Tori-G

I have completely re-edited The Girl in Red.. I haven't changed anything in the story, just moved a few things around so that it is one POV per chapter. Sadly, in doing this, the chapters are all different lengths, but it is so much easier to read now - I hope...