Toribear572

I'm really excited and happy, people are slowly reading (I got a vote the other day too) my short story Love Seems Easy When I'm With You. Please read it if you can. It's something I'm extremely proud of so nice feedback is welcome (and more or less wanted) 

Toribear572

I'm really excited and happy, people are slowly reading (I got a vote the other day too) my short story Love Seems Easy When I'm With You. Please read it if you can. It's something I'm extremely proud of so nice feedback is welcome (and more or less wanted) 

Toribear572

I re-published Chapter 1 of "Once Upon aComet" for a couple reasons.
          1.) I felt like it wasn't as well written as I had wanted and the scene between Celeste and Andrew was too awkward as it was, same with the scene between Celeste and Lily.
          2.) It was not as long as I wanted it, I felt like it was rushed,
          3.) Some things felt to "normal" for where I want to lead the story.
          Please tell me what you think of it :3