@Torkuda Congrats on the start of your MHA fanfic! I like the cover, and it's interesting to see you using present tense in a novel as well.
And oh dang- neat to see an audio version of tracers again! I didn't expect that Xao roast at the beginning though lmao- poor guy.
And yeah, your voice acting was pretty solid- Thomas' voice in particular sounded surprisingly accurate for someone his age. Was that AI generated I wonder? Either way, impressive stuff.
You used AI-art pretty well for the video as well imo, pretty sure I spotted Tyrin at the beginning which looked scary in a good way. Also liked seeing Triad in the background of Kyle's pic (or at least I think it's Triad).
I guess one small thing- in my opinion the image used for Jason (I believe that's his name) could do with being a little more specific (i.e. maybe with a single dark silhouette sitting/standing somewhere in a dark room, or wherever he might be talking to Thomas from in the chapter). But I know how annoying AI can be when it comes to refining specific prompts, so I definitely don't blame you there- it technically still gets the job done fine.