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Does your background profile picture have a amime name or is it just a art on Google 

I do not understand myself. 
          
          I used to like writing fan-fics, but as always that passion of mine disappeared as well as my activity in the world of wattpad. 
          
          I have deleted (Unpublished) all my books, as I can't bear to see my cringe works. 
          
          Sorry to all those that remembered me and was waiting for updates.

Happy New year! :D

Ey!! Naol Philippines

The plot about Amasawa being Kiyotaka's fiancee is very interesting, not gonna lie. You asked for criticism so I will give you my honest advice. I saw names which not in big letters. Names, places, etc must be in capital letters. I also noticed the word "I". Most of the stories I read have the same problem as others. "I" must be always in capital letter.
          
          Example:
          
          "Kiyotaka ayanokouji, i will never forgive you!" (This one is wrong)
          
          "Kiyotaka Ayanokouji, I will never forgive you!" (This one is correct)
          
          There's also some words that is misused, but I think its normal since you said you're a beginner. Just make it minimize as possible. Put also comma and periods at the right place since readers will probably confused. There are some readers who have a high reading comprehension so that will no problem to them, but how about to those who have low? Well, Im just an amateur writer so take this advice as a grain of salt. Overall, the plot is interesting, just write always and your skills will definitely improve.

Anyways never mind the stuff i said below and nice to meet you! Never seen you around but oh well I don't read anymore so makes sense. 

Bruhh. Why do i see kei haters frquently every gosh darn day! Like i mean, i understand as to why they hate her but like bro, if you experienced what she fcking experienced would you still be able to continue till highschool? I doubt that i do im 100% sure, so what about you kei haters that still hate kei even after knowing her past and even in the latest Y2 Vol. of COTE light novel huh? 
          
          What i dont like bout kei is her bullying (But after knowing her past i forgave her) which is probably why many people hate her, but do you blame her tho? After what she GOSH DARN EXPERIENCED on her previous school years? I bet you cant cuz you just hate her just bcz she was a bully early in the story.
          Also she ain't 'USELESS' for some kei haters who always complain how useless she is. Like cmon bro did you even read the COTE LN? I won't spoil you but all im gonna say is that she's useful which Kiyotaka states himself in the LN.
          
          For kei haters ifs: You like KUSHIDA? How is she not worst than kei when kushida will blackmail and expel you if you see even a glimpse of her true personality. You like HORIKITA (Girl)? Fck her! She will fcking stab you with a compass if you dont answer her question. You like CHABASHIRA? Bro, she's a milf but ya'll prob already considered that. So, you would like her calling you trash and other harsh words (Unless you like that kind of treatment)? 
          'Well not that its not like kei haters are gon listen anyways so arguing with them is just stupid.'
          
          At first i didn't rly pay attention to kei in the anime (Yes i did not read LN vol. 1-3 i just went straight to vol. 4 after reading reddit post whats the difference between the anime and LN), but after vol. 4.5 i started to like her and still liking her more and more especially in the recent Y2V5 LN. (Im simping hard hard if i do say so mysepf)