marwahfazel
hi! well i had just read the first 2 parts of your fiction :) but believe me if you see the difference in starting chapter and the present well there better :) good job :)
marwahfazel
hey i just read your ryan fletcher's story :D it' amazing :)
but their are some spelling and grammar mistakes :) it's okay though but get confusing i just wanted to say ....why don't you read some wattpad storie and well... improve your writing structure.
i swear i have no intention to hurt ur feeling and this is a constructive criticism plus i am not good myself :)
hope helps :)
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