My chapters are pretty long.

Most of what I write is character based - I want the characters to be the most intriguing part of the story. This tends to drag out my chapters as I try to make my dialogue as natural as possible. I really hope to improve in this area, so please comment on anything about my characters or dialogue that's confusing, unnatural, or hypocritical.

Also, I enjoy editing, so please let me know if you want someone to read something over for you.

Thank you for reading, and please comment!