Hey ToxicRhino just wanted to say that it's clear you will be using the MC from the og book in this one as a teacher of sorts, I just wanted to inform you his references to being betrayed may not make the most sense to some people as the original book is missing half of one chapter and some others; it starts with when Y/N confronts Ozpin after returning from Menagerie and asks what happened to Jaune then the chapter just ends and the next one has the reader already on the train to Atlas. I was wondering if you could please either put the chapters back in or just write a brief summary of what is missing, since for me and others the story doesn't make sense after that and we need to know it for the redux. Thank you.