ToxicRhino

There's about to be a loooooot of changes and story updates, sorry for the influx of notifications in advance! Forgiveness is Therapeutic is the next chapter to change, title should stay the same but after that it's all new content.

Bunkerfreak_HD

@ ToxicRhino  well, so much for that
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RAKUYO-KAIZEN

@ToxicRhino bro's seasonal goat fr, but still the goat tho
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Xandremago

@incognitoman2021 He just likes going AWOL
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Ilovedzd

Hey ToxicRhino just wanted to say that it's clear you will be using the MC from the og book in this one as a teacher of sorts, I just wanted to inform you his references to being betrayed may not make the most sense to some people as the original book is missing half of one chapter and some others; it starts with when Y/N confronts Ozpin after returning from Menagerie and asks what happened to Jaune then the chapter just ends and the next one has the reader already on the train to Atlas. I was wondering if you could please either put the chapters back in or just write a brief summary of what is missing, since for me and others the story doesn't make sense after that and we need to know it for the redux. Thank you.

alek_ackerman

HEEEEESSSS BAAAAAAAAACK

Tox8c8ty

YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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TheGhostKing151

YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHA
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KetsuHiuky

@alek_ackerman YEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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ToxicRhino

There's about to be a loooooot of changes and story updates, sorry for the influx of notifications in advance! Forgiveness is Therapeutic is the next chapter to change, title should stay the same but after that it's all new content.

Bunkerfreak_HD

@ ToxicRhino  well, so much for that
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RAKUYO-KAIZEN

@ToxicRhino bro's seasonal goat fr, but still the goat tho
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Xandremago

@incognitoman2021 He just likes going AWOL
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ToxicRhino

Hey everyone, Act 1: A Lil Meeting with Lil Miss has been changed to Two Fateful Encounters and has been fully fleshed out! Added about 7k words to the existing chapter, so I hope you enjoy reading it.

JacobKern1

Do you do requests?
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incognitoman2021

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@ToxicRhino Fuck somehow I didn't get notified about this but WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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