Toxic_Rain

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FracturedBitch1

Hi! Hope you're doing well. Random question... if you had to pick one author to read for the rest of your life, who would it be?

Toxic_Rain

Well if we’re talking Wattpad I couldn’t choose cause there are so many great authors on here, but if we’re talking published authors I’d probably have to pick someone who’s younger so I could get be getting new book  for a long time. Maybe Marie Lu cause I love dystopian books.
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Toxic_Rain

@AN88888888 
          Ok, I have a lot to say so settle down. First, off the bat, I love this book! Seriously I'm always a little worried jumping into a new book with an author I haven't read from before, but you blew me away. These past few days I've stayed awake binging this book and I'm so excited for the next chapter because right now it's left on a pretty serious cliffhanger.  There are, however (more toward the beginning of the book) that could use some editing, mainly grammar, and spelling. (Remember to always start a new paragraph after every line of dialogue). The dialogue is very easy to read and the storytelling gets better the more chapters I read. The Pov changes messed me up especially with chapter 32 because of the number of jumps in time, I understand the need to explain how each character is feeling but sometimes I feel it can get the reader out of the scene. I'd suggest changing to writing in 3rd person (this is just a suggestion I hope you don't take it personally :(  ).  I can go on more about editing, but I won't if that's not what you want from me.  I love the long chapters you've written though it's so nice to see how long each chapter is and not only that but how greatly it's written. This idea as far as I'm concerned is so original and its also such a cool idea, it takes some pretty good imagination to come up with these characters and storyline Another thing is the plot twists! Oh my god, every single chapter is has something new and engaging that keeps me having to keep on guessing what is going to happen next. Overall I think this is a really good book and I'm totally going to be checking for new updates every day. I'd definitely suggest your book for anyone reading this because it is so good. Let me know if you want me to go more in-depth with the editing or anything else that could help. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing creation with everyone here in this community. :)

Toxic_Rain

@AN88888888 
            Hi! No worries, I'm so glad you found my review helpful :) I cannot wait for the final product, I'll probably have to give it a re-read once you've gone through and edited it ;)
            
            Let me know if I can do anything else for you, otherwise, I will be waiting for your next project. I hope you stay safe and healthy during these times <3
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AN88888888

@Toxic_Rain  Hey there ! Firstly my sincere apologies in coming back so late :-( !! and secondly a big sincere THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart on giving my book a chance !! It is sincerely so much appreciated ! Also i love your review, and feedback , it is so insightful ...i would go as far as saying you've really got a talent for this thing :-) ??
            
            So yes, i have to agree with you on the editing, its basically going to be my new homework for the next week or so ...and youre right its especially towards the earlier chapters.....hopefully i will have it polished up in no time :-) !
            
            Other than that i just wanted to reiterate my thanks to you, i randomly inboxed you and you really came through !! Sincerely meant a lot to me !! 
            
            Take care and Keep safe !! You're theee best x0x0 !!
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Toxic_Rain

Hope this helps :)
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Toxic_Rain

Do any of you have any romance book suggestions? I'm dying to read a cute romance story so please help me out :)

AN88888888

@Toxic_Rain awesome!! Thanks alot, much appreciated!
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Toxic_Rain

@AN88888888 
            For sure! I’ll check it out tonight or sometime this week and reply on my conversations tab or yours, which ever you want! I read the description and it sounds super interesting! :)
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AN88888888

Hey @toxic_rain, I'm looking to get a fair opinion on my book? It's an romance story but with action , if you get time please check it out on my profile.. (it's the only 1). Otherwise take care!
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ScarlettBlackDaisy

Hey! Thank you so much for listing "Knowing Xavier and other true stories" ^_^ really hope you like it and don't hesitate to share your views ❤️

ScarlettBlackDaisy

Aw, thank you so much! You're very kind. I'm sorry for responding so late. ❤️❤️
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Toxic_Rain

I absolutely love your style of writing. It’s so hard to find amazing books such as yours and I’m so happy that I found it. It deals with such difficult topics with care and thought. I love all of the characters and how they aren’t 2D images you could find on Pinterest. Thank you for sharing your work and giving me and others the opportunity to relate and fall in love with these people. ♥️
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