Your stories are short but sweet. It seems like you have trouble sticking to one point, one story, and one plot, and you prematurely start them before having a somewhat clear map in your head. Don’t get me wrong - I love your FanFictions. It’s just sad to see all three of them abandoned. I don’t know what’s going on, but all I can say is that you have a lot of potential and could be a decent writer if you spend some more time detailing your storyline. Now - feel free to ignore this criticism. I have no idea how hard it is for you - I just wanted to praise what you had and see if I can help mold your work to be even better.
