NaomiLucifer

Hi! You may not remember me, but I suddenly found your profile in my story the boy who cried vampire a while ago, and I took your advice and try constantly to change and read more about writing styles. I hope that if it's possible that you have any time at all could you possibly read the first chapter again as I want to see your thoughts on it. 
          
          Sorry to bother. 
          
          ~Trick

NaomiLucifer

XD I didn't expect you to read it again so soon... Now I'm nervous...  heh.
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TrainsRus

 O I remember you X3 
            Yeah sure I'll read the first chapter again 
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NaomiLucifer

Remember me Saika! I followed you and about to read your book.

TrainsRus

Lol ok then
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NaomiLucifer

Ok. If you read it's gonna be weird but I hope you can take it.
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TrainsRus

@NaomiLucifer oh hello :3 yeah i will put your story on my reads list, might as well
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