Wind with no Direction

I've now started my mostly reader input-based novel: Break Down. I've layed the groundwork and the first chapter as an impression but apart from what I can give as a writer I need your submissions. If you have any ideas at all, be it for characters, settings or story arcs please do submit it to me after you've read everything so far. I'm also happy to accept art and any other supporting works so don't be shy to go all out. This project will rely on the ideas of my readers and followers and you will be credited alongside your idea within the novel. I hope you can do your best.

Due to the assume length and story relevance of the upcoming Chapter 6, I have released a 500-or-so word bonus chapter, 5.5, to make up time while I integrate the new characters. This chapter has nothing necessarily story relevant but instead includes some insight into the musings of Jakuna herself, so its more of a self-reflection chapter, and also provides some information on the differences between 2020 Jakuna and 2019 Jakuna. I hope you enjoy.

Chapter 5 of Rebellion of the Soul has now be published, please enjoy

I don’t really believe in love at first sight, until I saw you.
          
          ( sorry >///< )

Note to Followers: I will be publishing a character profile list for Rebellion of the Soul once Chapter 5 is released if anyone asks for it, which will also include original Japanese spellings of the character's names, which I believe adds depth and meaning to who they are in the story.

Feedback would be appreciared on the now-complete Rebellion of the Soul Chapter 4.
          
          Coming soon will be Chapter 5: By My Own Side

Thank you for being my luck 100th follower ♥

Planning a third work soon, many ideas already being figured out:
          
          Mind, Blood, Spirit
          
          A mostly Action story based around the main character Jin's struggle with having two gifts:
          The first being that the wind changes his spirit, causing him to become less timid the stronger the wind is
          The second being that when injured, he has the ability to form his blood into a substance stronger than diamond
          
          The story will focus around his struggles with these clashing and sometimes mentally and physically scarring abilities, and how many of those he meets come to fear him