your Writing us Good.Like your English is Good without any Mistakes But Make Better Plot. Decide what you want to do with the story. Ik my opinion doesn't matter because that's how writers are. they get offended. But I wanted to tell you this because you are. Good writer I just wish your plot would make more sense . like if you want Taehyung to be a playBoy then you can't make him fall in Love in the next Chapter!