Batch chapter release for Callisto - "Dune Runner", "Fear to Tread", "A Word Most Useful" and "For my Gods and People"
These signal the end of my 'content' additions to the edited version of the book. The opening of Callisto now features both the singular pov of Rain-Born and Jespar before they meet each other, and centers on the culture of the Hanakh people before Rain-Born sets out on her quest.
Its my hope that this more gradual start better sets up Rain-Born as a character as well as the major themes I explore through her (and her cheekly lil companion's) journey through The Deadlands.
Any comments on how this new opening arc fits with the rest of the story are intensely appreciated.