KimoyaCrooks

Not here to judge ur book just pointing out something. Use more quotation marks to show conversations please, it helps with the flow of reading. Im in love with this book already so plz plz plz no slow updates and keep doing u

TravisBailey

Point taken, was not focusing on grammar and punctuation since I was doing it on my phone. But ty for the feedback, improvements to come. 
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KimoyaCrooks

Not here to judge ur book just pointing out something. Use more quotation marks to show conversations please, it helps with the flow of reading. Im in love with this book already so plz plz plz no slow updates and keep doing u