Tread-zan

To everyone who has read chapter 29 of My Boring Lover. I'd like to politely and apologetically ask you all to re-read since my editor and I were clearly not understanding each other on the Fever partT_T
          	
          	To clarify:
          	
          	Basically, it was Glenn who fell asleep, not Winter. My editor sort of misunderstood and it was also my fault for not writing it clearer. 

Tread-zan

To everyone who has read chapter 29 of My Boring Lover. I'd like to politely and apologetically ask you all to re-read since my editor and I were clearly not understanding each other on the Fever partT_T
          
          To clarify:
          
          Basically, it was Glenn who fell asleep, not Winter. My editor sort of misunderstood and it was also my fault for not writing it clearer. 

lxojxun

— a message has arrived!
          
          hey there, my cousin told me
          about your account so I decided
          to Check your works. I can see
          some parts where you could
          still improve to become a better
          writer and i wanted to ask you
          if it's okay for me to help you?
          
          i don't know, i didn't want to
          come off as rude by immediately
          pointing out things.
          
          that's all really-

Tread-zan

Thanks so much, I'll keep that in mind. I just started in October and have no writing background whatsoever so this is a big help. 
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lxojxun

( @Tread-zan )
            
            re-read what you wrote.
            
            Even though you have an editor,
            ( i envy you for that ) make sure
            you still re-read it before posting
            what you wrote.
            
            this way, you can see the parts
            where you're lacking and it can
            even help you write the next
            scene for your next chapter!
            
            ( works for me )
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lxojxun

( @Tread-zan )
            
            know your limits!
            
            most authors tend to write
            multiple stories in one time.
            
            doing that can stress you out
            but if you're comfortable with
            it then go ahead! just make
            sure you know your plot, don't
            mix them up!
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