@dukepearl
Leslie!!! I tried to leave a comment on ur story, but it didn't work. So here it is:
Actually, I really liked it!!! At first I was like "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY CAN'T BE DYING!!!!!!!!!!!!", but then I kept reading. I was like: "Phew, they got into Elysium, and the chose rebirth, it's all good now." It was a really sweet story, nice job!