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Chapters 34 and 35 are now posted. Chapter 36 will be the finale woo!

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Decided to take off the "0225" thing from the "Something" title. Maybe I'll still publish the other version eventually, maybe I won't. But the original title I feel still works for this updated version, even though the 2nd and 3rd acts have been drastically changed from the original draft. It still works because the tale still contains Xandra's voicemail that ends with the whole "You are worth something," even though she wasn't being sincere when she said that. But it constantly comes back to Ikjot's mind, even in this new version of the story. So yes. "Something," I feel, can still work as a good title for this book. It's a reoccurring theme throughout this tale.

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Actually, correction: Xandra’s voicemail in the original version had nothing to do with falsely uplifting its listener’s hope about themselves. If anything, it was the complete opposite. I of course changed this since Xandra’s whole thing at the beginning of the story is fooling people. Why would she give herself away through a nasty voicemail to people? Lol.
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There’s a chance my laptop’s busted. 
          
          Whenever I try posting chapters from my phone, WattPad doesn’t manage to retain the italic formatting on some dialogue—something very crucial to certain ways characters say things and ESPECIALLY when they have thoughts.
          
          That stated, there may be a point where I have to update all my chapters—both on here and on “Penana” (that’s the other website I’ve been posting my chapters to) to where the italics are formatted to something different. This of course will take a lot of time… so finishing the novel may be delayed, if necessary. The formatting is very crucial, so that you as the readers are confused between the spoken dialogue and the inner dialogue of these characters.

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Typo — “…so that you as the readers are *not* confused between the spoken dialogue and the inner dialogue of these characters.”
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Changed the name template to “0225Something” for the story.
          
          Let me explain: The version you’ve all currently been reading is a revised one. Even in the first act of this story, there were some minor changes, mainly to set the stage for Xandra to NOT be the ultimate / main villain.
          
          But I constantly find myself looking back on how the story was originally intended to go. Xandra *was* going to be the main villain. Trerchry and Acplait didn’t even exist in the original plot.
          
          That said, there’s going to eventually be two of “Something” out here. The one you’ve been reading so far is “0225Something”
          
          The second one I’ll eventually publish (unless WattPad doesn’t allow it since the first act is mostly copying the first act of this one) is “0712Something” 
          
          I used “0712” in the second one’s title as that’s the earliest date I saw (7/19/12) in my Yahoo email that pertains to the original manuscript. Back then, I was calling the story “Series” instead of “Something,” but I’ll still keep “Something” as that name was very crucial to what the story was about.
          
          So… yeah. You’re basically in for two versions of this one story, lol. 
          
          And from there, I invite you to be honest. It’s up to you guys, whichever version you like more. Because I might just make a book series that continues from whichever one wins your appreciation the most.
          
          Cheers!

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I think I know the route I’ll take for publishing “0712Something”
            
            WattPad tends not to be able to retain certain formatting that I’ve used for my story before.
            
            So “0712Something” will be published as a narrated book on YouTube. I’ll just use my screen record program for it.
            
            For those of you wondering, I go by the same name on YouTube that I do on here. Trerchry.
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Just touching base. I am heavily in the process of moving now, hence why Chapter 31 hasn’t been finished yet. I’ll be able to post once I have enough of Chapter 32 written and then be able to add the “next chapter preview” to 31.

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Small edit to Chapter 22: I changed it to where Ikjot’s Poison Dart Unraveling power can restore life only once; not an infinite number of times. There’s a reason for this, based on upcoming chapters I have planned.