Trisha6767

Short notice ch 6 is taking a time cuz I moving somewhere so Tommorow probably I'll be posting ch 6

Trisha6767

Hi guys I am a new writer so if u think that there should be some perfection drop ur thoughts in the comments plz

Trisha6767

@Trisha6767 thankx for ur suggestion I'll mind these changes but photos can't be replaced cuz the faces will be changed if I change so I will think Abt it
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AuthorSaanvi123

@Trisha6767 I loved your writing style. But I would like to give you one suggestion, it would look better if you typed your book in normal (left to right) format. And although the AI generated images you use look good, You can also try using images from Pinterest, they look more realistic. And I think that the book's title would look better if it was 'The Train to Vrindanvan'
            Although, this is just a suggestion  you can still continue with how you like it if you want and I know that I'll still be hooked to your book.
            Love,
            A reader of yours.
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