TriumphantFury

Aww! Thanks so much! And I get it. Lol. I love him too. I wish he was cannon.

Yes I’m an adult even though my prof picture doesn’t suggest it. (It’s old)

Thanks, and take as much time as you need, there’s no need to rush. (Just not too long, my patience is still shorter than a toddler)

Thanks for reaching out. Wow, I love hearing that my stories were able to help you with your English Competition! That’s such high praise! And I’m not sure when I’m going to be able to update. We just moved to a new house and things have been crazy busy for the last 4 months. All my free time has been devoted to packing, painting, and unpacking (hence the VERY late replies and non-existence online presence the last while). Hopefully my life and mind can settle enough for me to get back to writing soon, but I’d really like to finish one of my WIP’s before I dive back into DoP. It’s definitely still coming though, as my brain is running through the plot almost daily. Lol

@LaiYanJia Nice job, definitely agree that reading triumphantfury's works is improving my braincell count and my English/Grammer.

 Aww, yay! Thank you  

@Shadowpsych P.S. Just finished Wrapped in Red, or I guess I finished what has been written, meaning I've officially read every book on your profile.

@TriumphantFury No problem, I hate it when Wattpad conveniently forgets to notify me on things too. Thanks for the update, and I hope everything works out for you soon.

@Stardust-Fury If you wanted the root of your magic to function like an organ, or part of the body, then I would suggest looking into some biology notes to get a feel for how each different organ behaves. Its needs, functions, what happens when something goes wrong with them, etc. This would likely help you to create your own 'soul' while also making it more realistic so that your rules don't end up all over the place. For example, is the magic dispersed throughout the body, or is it centered somewhere specific instead, because that would change what weaknesses your magic users have. Can it be damaged? How?

@Stardust-Fury That sounds kind of similar to the basis of magic in the Shattered Realms series by Cinda Williams China. Reading that might give some good inspiration. (P.S. Shattered Realms is the sequel series. The original explains magic better but I can't recall what it's called.

This is a really good piece of advice. I myself have no idea what to base my magic system off at all 
            
            I have often loved the idea of both everything having an extra something like Essence and also the idea of “The Soul” being a physical thing, like an organ. 
            The organ itself grants access to magic because it naturally produces Essence that can then in extension allow a user to manipulate the Essence of an object to be in tune with their own Essence and well manipulate the object.

@ TriumphantFury  and of course your stories deserve a re-read, are awesome :))

@ TriumphantFury  well, that's ok for me, I know we all have a live, just, please, don't forget it 

@WhiteLily09 I'm so immensely happy to hear that you consider my stories worth a re-read. Sorry for taking so long to update them, but I've been really busy with work and courses, and by the time I get home, my brain is fried. I will try to get an update or two out soon, but it may have to wait until I'm on holidays in a couple weeks.