Trixdeluxe

I redid the first chapter to have like a catchy intro, you don’t have to reread it but I just thought I would tell you

Trixdeluxe

Should I add a hook to the first chapter? I feel like people are getting bored and I feel like I had to get them interested somehow 

_Midnightdarkness_

@Trixdeluxe  yeah a hook would be pretty good.. 
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Trixdeluxe

Yeah like a catchy intro or something. That’s what I meant, sorry 
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_Midnightdarkness_

Hey! Can u read my story and vote... Can u follow as well.. I'll do the same... 
          I love the concept of ur story.. It's like the special editions of the goosebumps books.. 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/387981830?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_Midnightdarkness_

Trixdeluxe

Oooo, yes you should! I’ll definitely read it 
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_Midnightdarkness_

@Trixdeluxe  Hey!
            
            Quick question. Should I start a book for "real crimes"? It will be just an awareness book that people like them exist or people did it for justice/revenge.
            
            And no I won't copy paste from any website or google.. I'll read it myself and write it from my own words so it will be easy for others to read.
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Trixdeluxe

@_Midnightdarkness_  Of course I will read and vote your story!
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_Wee_Monster

Hello there,
          
          Sorry for disturbing you I would like to introduce my story 'Addicted to you' ,https://www.wattpad.com/story/367334706?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=_Sahana_sana
          
          I want you to try my story and give a honest review of my story. And I hope you will enjoy it. 
          
          Sana♡

Trixdeluxe

Ooo, I’ll definitely check it out!! If you don’t mind checking out mine!
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Trixdeluxe

Wanted to let you guys know that I changed the style?(I don’t know what’s it’s called ) it’s how I’ve seen other writers on here have done it. I hopefully will post more chapters soon. Depending on how school goes :)

sreetastic

@Trixdeluxe really appreciate it I mean it's good to discover new styles and see which suits you the best!!
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Trixdeluxe

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I suck ass as describing stuff  I need like advice or something 

Trixdeluxe

It’s like an old profile pic. I’m trying to find a new one but it’s kinda hard and I keep forgetting
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JaydenMarkHendry

Can I just ask: Why do you have Tate McRae as your profile pic ?
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