Knightmare (@TroyKnightmare)'s conversations

TroyKnightmare

Apr 17, 2015 03:23AM

Thanks,FloodControlDam3  for informing me about my grammar errors.I will look into this matter.I was never really good at English but I just love writing.
          	Thanks again,
          	TroyKnightmare

TroyKnightmare

Apr 17, 2015

Thanks,FloodControlDam3  for informing me about my grammar errors.I will look into this matter.I was never really good at English but I just love writing.
          Thanks again,
          TroyKnightmare

FloodControlDam3

Apr 16, 2015

I liked your work and thought you had an intriguing storyline and good characters, but your grammar really could use some work. People are more likely to want to read your story if there are no grammar errors. The only issues I noticed are that you need a space after every punctuation mark, whether it's a period, a comma, or a semicolon. Thanks, and have a nice day.