@lovethis09 I've been reading it and I LOVE it so far, just sometimes I get confused wether or not it is Harry saying stuff or Alfie saying stuff. But apart from that it's reeeeally good
@pewdspewpew thanxxxx.....ive kinda changed the story a bit....to ya know, make it not seem too much confusing. if u r still confused, read the parts again, to make sure. thnxx.......did u vote? xD