vicktrapp10

my God!
          who saves lance? lance is ok?
          cap 17 is good.

vicktrapp10

whoa!
            SHIRO DID LANCE LIFE.
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vicktrapp10

cap 14 was great.

vicktrapp10

ok.no problem.
            good luck write!
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Truffles19

@vicktrapp10 well I'm not sure if I'll do that sort of thing but who knows. This story is me just writing what ever comes to mind as it continues on.
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vicktrapp10

I'm looking forward to seeing Lance captain america never give up until the end.
            next cap.
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vicktrapp10

my favorite and chance.
          I do not like to lance as seductive and arrogant.
          I like mature, fierce and gentle lance.
          do you remember captain america movie?
          lance as captain america and use the serum injection.
          do you think my idea?

vicktrapp10

ah! forgot it.
            know different from movie.
            do you know shance can mpreg?
            serum has gene uteros has males.
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