TruthfulCritic

Welcome to Wattpad! Your description caught my eye, I'd love it if you were to critique my story. =)
          
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          Like vampire stories? Well, sink your teeth into this! ',..,'
          
          'The Not So Secret Life of Helena Callahan'
          
          ^ My story follows a teenage runaway, who sells her body to make a living. And her not so average life is about to get even more bizarre when she meets a guy who gives her a little more then she bargained for. ;-)
          
          -- Emma.

Hello!!! Welcome to Wattpad! 
          
          Well, I was wondering if you would take the time to look at my story, "You're my Stormy Summer," he whispered. 
          
          LINK: http://www.wattpad.com/420053-you're-my-stormy-summer-he-whispered 
          
          & My new story, Bound For Eternity: Werewolf or Vampire Love? 
          
          LINK: http://www.wattpad.com/433588-bound-for-eternity-werewolf-or-vampire-love
          
          Comment//Vote//Become a Fan:) Its all greatly appreciated! 
          I even have some poems up if you are interested:) 
          Thanks for your time:D 

Hey! 
          I appreciate that there's a critic on here, and I agree that votes+comments does not = good story, but just remember that people are more likely to change for the better if criticism and direction are delivered with TACT. (I would've underlined "tact" instead of caps, but this website doesn't provide that option.) Anyway, I would really appreciate someone to critique my writing, but remember, tact is nice. I am always open for suggestions on my stories, but I'm more likely to ignore them if they are rude. 
          In that case, please, enlighten me as to your opinion on any of my works! I have a few stories and a LOT of poetry, so if you have time, check out my stuff!
          Oh, and welcome to Wattpad! :)

hi welcome to wattpad :))
          
          if u have time can u please read my story?
          I have just uploaded my new story which is:
          "A disease to love. A blood to live."
          becoming a fan/vote/comment are greatly appreciated:))
          tnx^^xoxo
          
          well am already your fan:))

Hey!
          Please could you check out my story 
          Theo Clayton, I hate you.
          Its about a girl who falls in love with her jerk of a best friend :)
          thankyou!!
          DayoldBlues
          xx

hey!!:) I was wondering if you could comment my some of my stories that mld mean a lot to me.  Thanks

Hey there, 
          I have this story called 
          'When Ms Hot Topic Fell For Mr Hollister' 
          that I was hopi­­­­­­­­ng you could tak­e ­a ­lo­ok­ a­t ­an­d ­give­ my ­some feedback! 
          Thanks; 
          
          Gem xx

If you like love stories..,
          I got one..
          entitled INTENTIONS: HER WAS MONEY, HIM WAS LUST..
          
          If you have time please read it..
          And yeah.. I'm a boy..haha..
          so u can't usually see boy writers here writing romantic novels..haha..
          i got it now until part 8 so enjoy..!
          
          Don't forget to leave your comment
          and please vote..
          
          If you want, be a fan..
          haha
          
          THANKS IN ADVANCE..
          
          GB..
          
          XD