Eclendo

hhey its me, sorry if i have been inactive, im pretty much grounded till i improve my results lol
          
          hey also i changed the book a LOT, and i need someone to give me feedback, so after im done may you please give feedback on each chapter? well now its it doesnt have the r word anymore, but the plot does, i will explain
          
          suitinnit was held captive by this criminal organization, she manages to run away at the age of 25, and whats when her and kenneth meet, he had a caring heart so he tried to comfort her because she was shuddering and all, one of the people from the organization then tried to take him down, because there must be no "witnesses" but he managed to run away with her and saves her
          
          so yeah hes like letting her stay around him for protection but hes pretty grumpy about things, but the sad thing is, he ends up being tortured by them too
          
          this may be dark but its actually a vent book, the topic of people being chill with real gore existing makes me have a literal headache, and i actually start to shudder and cry when i think of it too intensely, its been coming into my dreams too. i saw gore on my computer in my dreams. so yeah im venting into this book, its not like i like it or anything. its a pure vent. im also animating it now

Eclendo

so yeah basically after two individuals went viral on the news (in the fictional world) and kenneths gore video is still around on the internet (again in their world), hes family is pretty much furious af, and they complain to the government about it, till they take action, and they did. they tracked the main area of the organization, which is inside of antartica. then they send all the mutants over there to hunt the terrorists down. its pretty brutal but they also save hundreds of more captives. including suitinnits long lost daughter. her friends and all.
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Eclendo

ive edited it. tell me if its better or not. and do tell me the lists of things i have done bad in the server. as i am trying to change.
          
          i want to be added back too. so please try to add me back after i appeal, im misunderstood. im not who you think i am. So give me a chance to explain myself.