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Thanks for reviewing my first chapter 
          I appreciate all the notes and I'll use them to improve my writing 
          I agree with all your points concerning the first chapter..but I'd like to ask you (if it's okay) to check out the other ones, I think you might not find most of the errors you mentioned, you might find others though  so that's why I want you to take a look 

Hi there
          Do you mind checking out my story "new to this world" and tell me what you think 
          I'd really appreciate it ❤️❤️

Thank you very much for liking my story (^_~)
          
          That story was actually based on a dream I had and it was also the first story I wrote.
          
          If you like, feel free to check out some of my other works too. I have a number of Fan Fictions, but I also have a handful of other stories too that I'm working on uploading to Wattpad.

Hey what's up?
          Like my new book cover?