Night2076
Hello, I like your plot and you seem to be quite a talented writer but I can see how you struggle with grammar. So I'd suggest you check out Grammarly, I think it will be helpful to you and also enhance the story.
Night2076
I hope my advice comes in handy and you keep writing amazing stories without having to struggle.
TuijaFlankkila
@Night2076 I mostly write to my own pleasure. English isn't my first language so I struggle and do my best
