Chin_Up_Winchester

Hi, I was wondering if I could edit your book? I think if the dialogue set up was changed from using colons every time (Ex. Ryan:)to using adjectives and such, your book would be a lot more fun to read. I wouldn't change the words in quotations or the overall message, I would just fix grammar and punctuation. I would do it on Fridays and weekends usually. Just so you know I'm a diligent reader of your story. Thanks.

Chin_Up_Winchester

@TumblrMan Okay I understand. It doesn't interrupt the reading at all once you get used to it. This story is down to Earth and real. You should keep it how you want it.
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TumblrMan

@Alpha_Zebra_101 With this story, I put in things that I've seen before. So the reason why the quotations are like that is because I've seen it styled like that in a book I read by John Green and David Levithan. David would do a similar thing to what I do so I put things like "Me:" or "Ryan:" like that because it shows how no one else does that in other books, so it makes this one more unique which is one of the things I'm trying to show off in the story: is that you don't have to follow the rules all of the time and you can do it whatever way you want it. There are many mistakes I've made, (especially in the beginning, when I didn't realize "Supposed" isn't spelled like "Suppose") but if you want to change things like misspelling or punctuation or adding adjectives, I'm fine. I just want to keep the "Ryan:" thing just to be different.
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