TurtleForTheWin

Hi Turtle! I really like your Ninjago fanfic. It's probably the best Reader Insert fanfic I've ever read. But since you're rewriting, I have an idea on how (I think) (Y/n) could be better at revealing his true potential. 
          It seems to me that the main obstacle to (Y/n) revealing his potential is the fear that other ninjas won't accept him because of his past (at least that's how I understand his character). So, in order to reveal his potential, Y/n needs to tell other ninjas about his past. They would come to the village, have the same conflict with Xavier, after which (Y/n) would run away to the cemetery and after talking to Michael's spirit, he would go to the other ninjas and tell them about his past from his point of view (including his laughter as a defense mechanism) and only after that his potential would be revealed. And then, he would save the village from the tornado. 
          The conflict between Kai and (Y/n) could be based on Kai blaming (Y/n) for Zane's death. You could rewrite the battle as if all the ninja except (Y/n) were trapped while Zane sacrificed himself. And Kai would blame (Y/n) for not doing anything to save him, and in his emotions, call him a monster. And it would hit him much harder, as if history from his past was repeating itself, as if he couldn't save his close friend again. 
          You don't have to do all of this, these are all just random ideas that I really wanted to share. (English is not my native language, I am writing all of this through a translator). Anyway, I look forward to your updates. Have a nice day!

Dude, Instead of Kai YN would ask Nya instead, he tried to ask Kai but it was just as Cole came over he shuffled elsewhere when Nya saw him. YN would be so nervous to propose. I wanna say a few moments after Lloyd and Garm left into the evil fart cloud YN drags Cole off while Nya secretly gives YN a thumbs up meanwhile YN is over here nervous and giving a thumbs up back with a nervous smile as he takes Cole into a different room. 
          
          “Are you okay? Is something wrong you look nervous” *Asked Cole who hadn't a  clue what was about to happen* 
          
          “F-fine, I am perfectly fine…I wanted to ask you something actually” *YN says his hands in his pockets fidgeting with the yin-yang that he's hiding* 
          
          “What is it?” *Cole asked confused* 
          
          “I- um- damn why is this so hard(that's what she said-me)” *YN says to himself as Cole puts his hand on YN’s shoulder* 
          
          “It’s okay, whatever it is it can't be that bad, just say it like ripping off a bandaid…I really have to stop doing that” *Cole says as he realizes he did the bandaid thing again*
          
          (First Spinjitzu Master give me strength) “Heh, um- I know the timing isn't exactly great but I still wanted to say this because I love you, and you're an amazing boyfriend so” *breathes in and out as he gets on one knee as he takes the Yin Yang promise Cole blushes as YN did too as he smiles* 
          
          “Will you be my yang?” *YN asked with a nervous smile holding the medallion out* 
          
          “The timing is bad I know but-”  *YN said before getting cut off by Cole with a kiss making the two blush even more* “Is that a yes?” *YN said his voice wavering from the surprise kiss as the two hold hands(Fuck their so gayyy my hearttt)* 
          
          “Yes, YN a thousand times yes!” *Cole said hugging YN and picking him up*
          
          “COLE! Put me down” *YN says as he giggles blushing as Cole puts him down the two kiss again as Cole takes Yang off the medallion their faces both red from blushing* 
          
          “We should get back to the others” *YN said still holding Cole’s hand walking out back*

This is just a small question for fun, if and/or when Cole and Y/N get married who would propose to who? 

@TurtleForTheWin I feel like YN would probably be more clingy to Cole not because of mischaracterization but just based on the facts of how many times Cole has nearly died(ie the fall, Naddakan, when Lloyd and Nya thought the others died, Dragons Rising, Prime Empire, I think there's more but idk) there are a lot of times where the others died and that's actually really concerning wouldn't be surprised if you went with the cursed theory I made and YN just starts crashing out and blaming himself like a mf

@TurtleForTheWin Turtle any reason why you confirmed past Nightmare Sans Level bullying from Y’s childhood :’) I knew it was bad but not nightmare sans level bad HOW IS HE NOT A VILIAN ALREADY also Y’s vilian name should be Chaos the opposite of Tranquility. Which reminds me since Y is a neutral chaotic type of character he murders but only bad people would C murder heroes? I think Vilian YN is just Jinx on somehow more shimmer/crack(Arcane ref)….Vilian Yn is scary 

came here from ao3 bro this ninjag story be hella amazing oml im on chapter 50 this is so peak

Tell me why wind is confusing af???
          
          LEGO pls give us more info abt it's origins and make it make sense bc I can't just keep rewriting Y's connection to it ○|￣|＿

@TurtleForTheWin I feel like Wu saw Morro in YN a few times before Season 4  but especially in season 5 when yn was upset about Wu not telling him that Morro existed YN yelling reminded him of Morro yelling at Wu because of destiny 

You good, dude? Also happy new year!

Dude are you okay????? It’s been over a month now and now I’m slightly concerned. Of course there’s no rush but can we have a slight update indicating that you’re alive?
          
          
          Also have holidays dude!