TurtleYuki-san

The only reason i still post short stories here even though m exams are coming is because I seriously need some comments on my grammar and stuff like that. If you spot grammar errors in my story, please tell me, okay? thanks x3 

SoldiersLove

@TurtleYuki-san I don't really have any suggestions... I think you have the story line, right? Go on with it... it's going great... I suppose you'll include Josephine's mom's part too...? And maybe even the bit about the man  who made the doll...? Just keep writing!! :) :)