The only reason i still post short stories here even though m exams are coming is because I seriously need some comments on my grammar and stuff like that. If you spot grammar errors in my story, please tell me, okay? thanks x3
Thanks for fanning :) you're awesome do check out my stories and leave a comment of whatcha think :) I'll definitely check yours out. N please please check out cry of the ocean haha! Btw, I like your bio
The only reason i still post short stories here even though m exams are coming is because I seriously need some comments on my grammar and stuff like that. If you spot grammar errors in my story, please tell me, okay? thanks x3
@SoldiersLove yeah i have the storyboard all done till the end of the story, her mum and the doll maker will appear later in the story, thanks anyway! ^^
@TurtleYuki-san I don't really have any suggestions... I think you have the story line, right? Go on with it... it's going great... I suppose you'll include Josephine's mom's part too...? And maybe even the bit about the man who made the doll...? Just keep writing!! :) :)