Teary_Ghost_Deluxe

From what i seen, alot of people are saying they're fine with me reboot team dawn, so that's what i will do.
          
          So the original team dawn will be discontinued.

I been thinking
          
          After rereading Team Dawn
          
          i might rewrite the whole story
          
          1) The characters seem unlikable and the plot seems like a ripoff of cartoons I watch
          
          2) chapters were rushed(I wanna take my time with writing it)
          
          3) characters that feel outta place from the actual plot 
          
          Again I'm not sure if i will rewrite it but i leaning towards yes
          
          What do you all think?

//spoilers for characters for team dawn
          
          https://docs.google.com/document/d/1635LcxJwLrvmmVuuheraMbKDYfoGo6uYzPnqElRRfYw/edit
          

https://youtu.be/RgttR2qtCnI

Didn't expect me to post an episode today huh?
          Me niether lmao

Well , it's 11:30 here
          
          In a few minutes I'll be 14
          Imma sob here, thanks 
           

Ok, a new chapter of Team Dawn should come out either tomorrow or Friday 
          

Coming Soon
          Team World 

Sorry, I been gone for a while, but I'm almost done with Wishing Witch ep 1, coming out tomorrow. 

HI MOM!