butterflyindi
Hello!
Thankyou for your suggestions, I will definitely consider it and make changes in my story according to this.
butterflyindi
@Twagholio yeah... actually I just started writing stories...so there is not room but full ground for improvement....and you help me a lot by recognising my weak side...and also give me suggestions...Thanks ❤️
Twagholio
@butterflyindi Your welcome! It's a very hard strategy. Writers use call it show but NOT tell. Readers get spoiled if the narrator reveals things of what is happening, so what top authors do is express from a character perspective; number 1 being dialoge, and what the characters thinks, sees, (including ambience), and feels.