Tweakin_In_The_Park

Dear Raimo.

Chaddious

He wasn't a dear
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Tweakin_In_The_Park

Real note, im probably gonna take down from vegas to hell, i made it as a way to get all my thoughts out, but it ended up becoming a hodgepodge of just things i had in my phone at the time.
          
          I'll probably remake a different DnD story with one of my current characters, but for now this is the end of from vegas to hell

Tweakin_In_The_Park

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I hate female side characters
          
          Cause it's either "I hate you, i love you." "You beat me let's make babies." and the patented "You saved me, i don't know you, but you saved me, so i love you."
          
          Like I'm all for women, but make it realistic, like throw in some flirting, y'know season that shit, make the mc earn her trust, give them actual chemistry.
          
          ANDDON'TGETMESTARTEDONABSURDLYBLINDMCS-

Chaddious

@Tweakin_In_The_Park I will allow you to start?
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Tweakin_In_The_Park

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Okay I know, I just got hired at a job so less free time
          
          But I'm here to talk to yall mfs, now my readers don't do this, cause yall got common sense. 
          
          But I wanna talk about how readers love to go "Kill the bitch" "Oh make the mc learn under so and so" "Gove the MC this power, or this power" yada yada yada 
          
          And mind you, it'll be a character, WHO HAS NO RELATION OR A TERRIBLE RELATION TO THE MC.
          
          Like I pirate manhwa, A LOT and I read a lot of comments, and I stg mfs will say the most ABSURD SHIT, and they'll be like "Yeah, I just did that."

Tweakin_In_The_Park

@Chaddious nah you got the weak willed mfs who let kooché control them
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Chaddious

And then there's those weak willed mcs where they literally get pushed around by people who are literally weaker than him
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Tweakin_In_The_Park

make the love interest a strong bad bitch
          
          not someone who needs the mc to save her wvery 5 minutes
          
          *leaves before he gets death threats*

Tweakin_In_The_Park

@Chaddious that's not the topic right now
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