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          Could you check out my story the dead of night? 
          It's a ghost/human romance  and I would love to know what you think of it and I would love to get some constructive criticism on it :)

hey ! can you pleasee check out the new parts i've added to Vampire Huntress ....I really want some constructive criticism, and you do that so well ^_^ thank you

Hey 
          Would you mind checking out my story Frozen? I'd luv to know what you think. X

:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)): i will post as many of these as you like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i read your 'what i wont read' and i assure you that none of my stories are like that. so can u plz check them out.
          "soul mates"
          "behind closed doors" and
          "close by the heart"
          thanks in advance

Will you readed my stories please???? 
          I read your what I won't read thingy-ma-bomber and my story Alice in the 21st Century has none. But both of my other two have them in 'em. But they're not crap vampires. They're like super killer vampires when the story gets to them. They're just an afterthought of the main storyline. but yea. I shall link the three of them for yous. Pleases read them. 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/366184-alice-in-the-21st-century
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/622905-the-sight
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/332190-vampires-werewolves-and-werecats-what%27s-next
          
          Yes yes yes there they are. hehehehehehehe

mind reading my poetry?

hey :) i just posted part 2 of Vampire Huntress .....can u plz check it out and leave me some constructive criticism ....thnx ^_^ ..... i luv your comments, they're very helpful :)

hey
          
          it woul be great if someone could read my story and help me with my choice of words...i'm from germany so my english is far from perfect and my sentencec are often very short and there are a lot of repititions cos i don't know other words to say what i want to say...and ican't always express the feelings the right way...tell me words i could use instead or tell me a better way to connect the sentences so that the plot is flowing
          
          so if someone could read my story and maybe give me advices with my choice of words that would be great... the story is called "the prophecy-when darkness comes"

Whoa! More comments? Haha!
          LOL, I read everything you said and I have to say, you are an excellent critic. Maybe consider it as a job?=D
          
          Anywhoo, thank you very much for fanning! Really appreciate it!!
          Take care.
          x

thnnxxxxx alot.....
          at first my eyes popped out when i saw the length of the comment but after readin it i really appreaciated it.......
          dun worry ill make my chapters better as i go :)
          thnk u once again :D