mustard_paintballs

Your story has a LOT of potential and it is great! Their are minor errors but it's completely okay! Your story isn't too fast or too slow, just perfect! Interesting idea by the way! I would really appreciate it if you could do some of the things I did on your story! Good luck and UPDATE!!

Twichu

Wow. Thank you so much! I really appreciate your votes and comments, and I’ll probably get someone to edit my text soon! :)
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