Twilightinocean

Itna paisa kmana h ki bina soche samjhe ye wattpad ki kitabe pdh sku. Ek to "fist bump" aur dusra "unwanted" ka sequel. I wanna see vikrant:  the dumb boy se vikrant: the lover boy kaise bnta h. 

Twilightinocean

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Tldr: An author here, with little to no gyaan of biology her self tried to show how her ML touches and undresses the FL in the name of teaching her sex education, all while the ML thinks of FL as a child and his mere student. 
          
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          Noooo this author just justified her stupid writing in the name of normalising sex education. Literally all the points she said in her defence dont mean shit. First u say u hv little to no idea about biology. Then in the name of "research" u just copy pasted from Internet as dialogues and now the guy is touching her, getting naked and getting HER naked all in the name of sex edu. 
          
          And he plans to leave her. He just sees her as a student. Really nigga??? Wud u hv taught sex education the same way to any other student of urs like u did to her bcuz all she is, is a student who's 14 yrs younger to u. 
          
          And that author Literally implied that there was no porn in that time so he did all that undressing n touching thing. Ppl can get knowledge these days via porn. Lmao porn was never for the educational purposes. What is she high on???
          
          
          Literally so stupid man!! I can't with this. He could teach her via diagrams but nope!!
          
          If he was seeing her as his wife and THEN explaining it like this, I MIGHT hv found it fine. But that man thinks of her as a child Literally. 
          
          If it's all in "intentions" like author said, is the intention of seeing ur student naked to teach her stuff really the last option left to u?? 
          
          
          

Twilightinocean

@geothig you won't believe pr us author k comment section me bhot gandi gandi galiya likhi hui thi mere jaise logo k liye ki haye ye log sex education k against h. But it's not that. It's the way author is showing sex education that's not right. 
            
            Aur haa, author ne accept kra h ki use porn se hi sex education mili h baki nhi pta tha use kuch to isliye vo manti h ki phle porn nhi hoti thi us zamane me to ladka ladki naked ho kr ek dusre ko sikhayenge. Lmao doesn't make any sense but OK. 
            
            Uski story h jo marzi likhe. Ye to author ne b bol dia mai likhungi jo mera man h. Bas fir
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geothig

@Twilightinocean (⁠╬⁠⁽⁠⁽⁠ ⁠⁰⁠ ⁠⁾⁠⁾⁠ ⁠Д⁠ ⁠⁽⁠⁽⁠ ⁠⁰⁠ ⁠⁾⁠⁾⁠)(⁠╬⁠⁽⁠⁽⁠ ⁠⁰⁠ ⁠⁾⁠⁾⁠ ⁠Д⁠ ⁠⁽⁠⁽⁠ ⁠⁰⁠ ⁠⁾⁠⁾⁠)
            
            
            Bhai aise logo ko report kyu nahi karte yaar!!!!!
            
            
            Porn se konsi sex education milti hai bhai?!
            
            Mughe to nahi mili?!
            
            
            Or kisi ko kabhi mili hai kya?!
            
            
            Ye writer ko serious issue hai bhai kuch to mentally 
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Justromcoms

Hey there ,
          
          Firstly, loved your bio. It is something else! And I just read your post about commenting on stories. As a author, there is nothing more I enjoy than reading the comments on my book. 
          And going by your bio, I'm sure you'll like my book, BOMBAY ROMANCE.
          
          Is my book good? Well, that's for you to judge. Many of my readers think so, though. And I would love to have readers who comment as they traverse the chapters, aka, you!
          
          It is set in Bombay the 80s, an action romance book than has been loved by many. You can head over to the comments section of Epilogue-II and check the readers' reviews. 
          
          Check out the story once! If it disappoints, well, I don't know. Because I'm pretty sure it won't.
          
          Thanks for reading this message, if not anything else. Else, I'll meet you in my story:)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/344903285?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Justromcoms
          

Justromcoms

@Twilightinocean You are welcome. I will look forward to your comments. Happy reading:)))
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Twilightinocean

@Justromcoms I'll give it a try surely. Thanks for recommending 
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Twilightinocean

Can I say something here?? Whenever I interact in stories with authors (genuinely) I end up feeling obligated to comment nd interact in there every chapter. Like they react so beautifully to the comments that I don't want to sadden them by not doing it later on.
          
          Sometimes I just wish to read read and read. Ofc leaving a vote but it gets harder for me to keep commenting. But at the same time I don't want them to think that I don't like about the content as a reader. Bcuz I know how much they as story writers wish for there work to get recognised and loved. 
          
          Is this one of the many things introverts feel? 

geothig

@Twilightinocean ꒰⁠⑅⁠ᵕ⁠༚⁠ᵕ⁠꒱⁠˖⁠♡ no worries. 
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Twilightinocean

@geothig thanks for telling me this from both reader's and author's pov. I'll atleast leave an emoji or something next time I don't feel like commenting too much. 
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geothig

@Twilightinocean as an author. I love it when someone comments on my book. But if you don't feel like doing it then leaving one comment is also enough.
            
            
            When I was just a reader I used to feel the same. Sometimes we just want to read and vote. It's fine.
            
            
            P.S. I am also introvert. 
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Twilightinocean

I'm sorry this one story has like a male lead so (supposedly) green ki ab na ye insan lg rha h, na devta, na fictional, na haraa jhanda. Ye kasam se itna ch*tiya lg rha h. Like I cringe so so hard 
          
          Thik h bhai pyar me lattu dikhana tha pr itna wierd aur stupid nhi. 
          
          Aur story ki fl bhi aisi ki pucho mt 
          
          Kya yr kahaa se aisi inspiration mil rhi h tumko hme bhi btao.

geothig

@Twilightinocean That one book!!!!
            
            Girl!! I kid you not my junior is so crazy about the male lead of that book! And she told me to read it.
            
            I didn't! Because obviously my parents didn't buy me any Books except my board exam ones! Thankfully.
            
            
            Anyways, so I got to know about it from reels and all. I am just thanking God that I didn't buy that piece of work!!!!!
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Twilightinocean

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@geothig haina!! Dark romance is a slippery slope indeed. But I kid u not the primary reason I left reading that one dark romance book is bcuz of how stupid it was at times. I laughed and felt wierd at the lines I was supposed to feel hot. 
            
            The mafia guy fucking FL with gun was really funny 
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geothig

@Twilightinocean indeed!!! Agar itna age gap hai to personality different hoti hi hai.
            
            
            
            And ofcourse as we age humari personality and perspective dono badalte hai.
            
            
            To be honest in just 2 years a lot of things have changed about my personality and perspective.
            
            
            Like not even 6 months ago I was into dark romance, but then I started reading soft romance books and realised that dark romance normalised a lot of things that I actually thought they were okay in real lyf!!
            
            
            And bhai agar koi 30-35 saal ka hai. To vo definitely humare age group se different hoga, jaise hum apne se chote age group walo se different hai.
            
            
            
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Twilightinocean

Social media ne kutta bna dia h 

geothig

@Twilightinocean mai to vo chalati hi nahi. Instagram se hi kahi matha kharab ho jata hai 
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geothig

@Twilightinocean ಠ⁠_⁠ʖ⁠ಠ Maine to Instagram chalana hi band kar diya hai. Bohot dimag kharab hota hai 
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