Well the plot is pretty nice though it gave a lil resemblance to disney's Brave and somewhat other stuffs i have read and watched before so it didn't felt much new and unique but its nicely written for sure also its quite short to connect with, also the character development is pretty less but i surely think ya can make it better over time and maybe publish it someday well in terms of rating lets say its a brave attempt/100
Anyway i believe ya can do it because the writings have some maturity at least more mature than this message cum review btw now we are even because ya followed me on insta and i followed ya back in fact ya owe me one now as i read and reviewed on ya story.
GOOD LUCK
