Hey...I just popped over to check out your page (you commented on my book, Skipping Time) I just had a quick suggestion. On the book description for Why is Life Hard Sometimes you call the girl "little" which immediately makes me think of a little girl--like maybe up to ten or eleven years old. Then you say she found a "lover" So the whole thing takes on kind on a creepy vibe.
Basically, if you are going to mention a lover I'd definitely take out the words "little girl" in the description-- just leave it at "girl." Otherwise people might think the book is about a little kid finding a lover--which is skeevy and will also get it removed from Wattpad.
I truly hope you don't think I'm being rude.I'm just trying to help. :) Good luck with your stories.
