TwoSwansInBalance

Who would like to see Rafal commandeer the Inagrotten as a 'pirate?'
          	
          	I hope excessive eye contact and almost nothing entertain you . . .
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/388193769-return-of-the-inagrotten

TwoSwansInBalance

Admittedly, I mostly wrote this because it makes Rafal look simultaneously worse and cool—
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TwoSwansInBalance

Who would like to see Rafal commandeer the Inagrotten as a 'pirate?'
          
          I hope excessive eye contact and almost nothing entertain you . . .
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/388193769-return-of-the-inagrotten

TwoSwansInBalance

Admittedly, I mostly wrote this because it makes Rafal look simultaneously worse and cool—
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TwoSwansInBalance

Given how TOTSMOV41’s plot has evolved since I’ve added two scenes, there is some good news: Rhian now has a speaking role in real time (not only in a flashback), and Dot and Anadil get a short conversation amongst themselves to air their suspicions about whether Rafal is a zombie or a demon. Rafal will probably eavesdrop on them, and that happens while he is being trailed by Hester, even if Hester doesn’t know he knows she is spying on him.

TwoSwansInBalance

@CueberriezForever English is my first language and I read a lot, so I've likely been influenced by other authors' styles.
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CueberriezForever

@TwoSwansInBalance Oh, now I get it. Where did you get your English from? Very formal 
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TwoSwansInBalance

@CueberriezForever In this context, it means adding your name with an "@," so the message would be addressed to you when I reply.
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TwoSwansInBalance

And for my next trick (fic), I shall torture an immortal. Allons-y!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/371439567-salt-storybook-a-whump-fic

CueberriezForever

@TwoSwansInBalance I loved the torment of torture 
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rafalandrhian

✨ BOOP ✨
          
          You have been booped! Put this on 20 otherprofiles! Let the chaos/mayhem begin!

TwoSwansInBalance

@CueberriezForever It's some kind of BOOP chain.
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Kiera-Mistral-Fahey

✨ BOOP ✨
          
          You have been booped! Put this on 20 otherprofiles! Let the chaos/mayhem begin!
          
          

TwoSwansInBalance

I've written an alternate (happier) ending to Fall of SGE in which both brothers are alive and well!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/364524036-the-one-and-his-brother

KNY_doll

Ooooooo I'm going to read it! 
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TwoSwansInBalance

Additionally, regarding TOTSMOV41 (The One True School Master of Vault 41), there's a couple things to note about the premise and the changes I've made to canon, for context:
          
          1. The fic will disregard Fall as canon, yet will acknowledge Rise.
          
          2. There are several canon elements I'm NOT using. The Rafal is the fic is him from Rise, and ALSO from TLEA. I decided to only acknowledge Rise but not Fall because I didn't want to work with the identity-swap twist. So Rafal is Rafal is Rafal in this case. I will draw from both his Rise characterization and his TLEA characterization.
          
          3. Later in the fic, Rise Rhian only has minor appearances, and is present in Rafal's psyche, but he will not actually be a character until I write a possible sequel, if I ever do reach that point. So, you can assume Rhian was moderately "Good" to grey on the morality scale, and that Rafal was the one who ultimately committed the fratricide.
          
          4. I've decided not to acknowledge the OTK parentage twist. To clarify, Rafal will have no relation to Japeth, simply because it felt out of character for HIM to have children with a woman he loathed, even if it may have been "less" out of character for the CANON Rhian falsely disguised as "Rafal." I personally thought it contradicted his characterization, so Japeth's placeholder father, who probably won't even be mentioned in the story, will be the Green Knight, to explain his magical prowess as the Snake.
          
          Otherwise, for the most part, this fic is alternate continuity "canon," and diverges at some point during OTK.
          
          I've tried to set the stage and eradicate confusion as best as I could above, but if anyone would like me to demystify anything about the fic, my writing process, or anything else at all, feel free to send questions to me! Yet, I might not be able to answer everything, for various reasons, including limiting excessive spoilers, so please keep that in mind.