@CitrusCoffee Hello! Aw, thanks so much! I'm glad you like it and, sure, here's a better description: Ethin has fluffy black hair, thicker on top with shorter sides. He’s thin and muscular, like a swimmer’s body. He has teasing eyes, like he’s always about to start trouble, and they’re light brown. He has a thin, sharp face with strong features.
Roys has short brown hair with a square face, strong man body, narrow dark blue eyes and the shadow of a beard around his jaw. He’s a big, brawny guy, all muscle. He has multiple scars; one long one through his left eyebrow near his eye and going toward his ear, one going down his right cheek, one going over the right side of his lip down to his jaw and a long scar on the left side of his neck.
And absolutely! I don't normally edit on wattpad, it's just kind of a pain, but I am planning to publish this so if you notice a typo, lmk ^_^