Michael385756

OK, I have finished reading the chapter and then we just say.... It was awesome!!!! 🤩 
          I mean it absolutely nothing felt rushed. I liked that dynamics between all the characters, like sun and his antics with raider and definitely the dynamic between Ivar and his dragon.
          Another part I like is how it feels like you captured a good balance between dragon rider and Huntsman, and I'm kind of interested to know if Ivar knows about silver eyed warriors or if it's just a trait he noticed, and I am definitely looking forward to when raider meets the rest of team RWBY.
          Overall, I think this was an amazing chapter. In addition to this story 10 out of 10,
          and I won't rush you to complete it or anything, but I would very much enjoy seeing this story continue, RWBY and how to train your Dragon or some of my favorite stories and I really think this is a good crossover between the two of them so I would very much look forward to see what the story has in store awesome job on this chapter 👍😄🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉

Michael385756

@TyGeHO you’re very welcome and I look forward to seeing what you are having in store👍🐉🤩
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TyGeHO

Thank you so much for the feedback! I really do appreciate it so much 😭. Httyd and Rwby are also two of my favorites but I guess that’s obvious since I’m writing a crossover fic with the two. The story will definitely continue, I have so many fun ideas for the future that I can’t wait for you to see. So glad you’re enjoying it!! 
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TyGeHO

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@YourExBoyfriend Yes I'm alive, but barley lol. I write for the new chapter when I can but between family and school a lot has been happening on my end. Some good some bad. On top of that Ive rewritten this chapter multiple times to test out diffrent writing styles, this is my first story afterall. I'm a little more than half way done with the next chapter tho. Once summer break comes around and given the world hasn't gone to complete shit yet I should have more time to write and will probably release more freaquently.