I have repost my story Unknowing I have fixed the errors that I can see. hope y'all canz read it.. again and BTW for the people who wrote comments and ideas I really appreciate it and for the idea ppl I still have the ideas but you can still put things down so I can add more ppl to Unknowing and Two Lucky Girls that's the new story I'm working on with the two girls. so I just want to say thank you for waiting patiently.