|| your book is so lovely bubs !! Your writing style is gorgeous, if you’d like maybe you could put it through a checker because there are a couple of words that could be refined but other than that it’s just lovely :>
Deicide to write it here! I see a few problems with the story, you need pov a bit and study in dialogue as well, the bio shouldn't show almost half your story in it, it woke give away your story a bit too quickly
@Tyhond You are an excellent writer tbh! I didn't see any grammar issues and the plot is very interesting! On top of that, the story is detailed I love it <3 can you read mines please? the most recent one ^0^