Tyler Simpson

@RichardBunning 
          
          Thank you for your opinion! I really needed that. I think i'll just have an english teacher at my school help me out on all of my typo's/mistakes.

@RichardBunning @davidjnix 
          
          Thank you very much! That'll be very helpful to me. 

Tyler- Have read some of your work. You have loads of potential, and you are making a serious attempt at creative writing. There are a lot of mistakes in grammar, all easily correctable. Your book needs an adult to edit it, and importantly to talk through the actual wording you choose. Sometimes the words you use have implications you may not intend, as well as the ones you do. Some of your phrase choices are very clever- "they caused themselves death" for example.  Make sure your work is well edited. If it is already on Smashwords, or somewhere similar I would unpublish and have another go. Most books need dozens of edits before they are right- whatever the age of the author. Thank you "fanning" me- I'm very flattered.

Welcome to wattpad! And Thanks for fanning :) please check out my story and tell me what you think!

@TylerSimpson 
          :D
          Thank you

Thaank you so much for fanning me!! Means alot to me :D

@XxTheDarkAngelxX 
          
          Your welcome!! I love mysteries. and i'll be sure to leave some kind comments on your stories! (:

Thank you for fanning Tyler! Happy Belated Welcome to Wattpad! :D

Thank you so much for fanning;it really means a lot to me. 
          Please don't be a silent reader. Iwould love to hear what you think of mystories and poems. Once again;thank you so much!

thank youu both! (: