UchihaT

Hey ya, good job with the story. Only suggestions is that please write them in third person view and more formal sentencing not dialogue like a script. But other than that it read amazing. English ain’t my first language lol haha and my first time writing a Naruto story. Come check it out and tell me what ya think. It’s called Beauty and the Beast. 
          
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Excuse me UCHIHA_HEIRESS, your story is quite good and sometimes your words of sentence on the line is quite not fixed or accurate. But again, I love this story of yours and I added it on my reading list. Also, it needs a better improvement though.
          
          By the way, do you really accept a request about a Naruto story like focusing on Naruto Uzumaki himself as a protagonist and having a female OC human got reincarnated as a beautiful angel (Like Olivia - The Dark Angel from Granblue Fantasy or Shingeki no Bahamut game {Search that Olivia Dark Angel on Google or other browser apps}) as his lifetime guardian/partner/lover? What do you say?

Hi there, thanks for adding my story in your reading list hope you will love it so much. I highly appreciate it Thanks ☺️ *smile* (◔‿◔)