afreshpapershipper
Can i add some suggestions? If you dont like them,dont take it.
Suggestions: i really love your book now(though i only read one chapter) but could you atleast put some commas (,)? And periods(.)? I cant just read a chapter with no commas and periods on any sentence. It makes no sense if you ask me.
If you like to take this suggestion,feel free to use it. Sorry if this is offensive to your writing skills. I'll leave if you want me to. But then again,love your book.