UltimateKoof

Hey guys. I've decided to edit FREEX so I'm gonna have to unpublish it for a while. Reading back the previous chapters I guess I just thought some of them could be better. Some have bad grammar and spelling mistakes, there's plotholes, some chapters are too short and the book's just dragging on; 19 chapters in and not all the main characters have been introduced nor is the story really progressing.

UltimateKoof

Hey guys. I've decided to edit FREEX so I'm gonna have to unpublish it for a while. Reading back the previous chapters I guess I just thought some of them could be better. Some have bad grammar and spelling mistakes, there's plotholes, some chapters are too short and the book's just dragging on; 19 chapters in and not all the main characters have been introduced nor is the story really progressing.