Hey! I read "Insanity" and really admire your work! The way you draw characters through the story is incredible! The reader really feelsl like they're a part of the book! Good job!
Not to be annoying, but I'd be really appreciative if you took a look at mine? It's not a "Clique" girly kinda story nor is it about Vampires or anything fantasy. It's called Dancing In the Rain and I'm looking for any kind of constructive/helpful criticizm i can get!
Don't feel like you have to read it, though, because i realize a lot of people really want you to read their story and if it's a bother, i won't be offended or anything.
thanks so much! Great job on your story :))