UltimateStoriez

FINALLY finished Insanity. Okay, so it took me 6 months longer than expected, but that's okay :) Enjoy!

Addicted-Writer-101

Hey! I read "Insanity" and really admire your work! The way you draw characters through the story is incredible! The reader really feelsl like they're a part of the book! Good job!
          
          Not to be annoying, but I'd be really appreciative if you took a look at mine? It's not a "Clique" girly kinda story nor is it about Vampires or anything fantasy. It's called Dancing In the Rain and I'm looking for any kind of constructive/helpful criticizm i can get! 
          
          Don't feel like you have to read it, though, because i realize a lot of people really want you to read their story and if it's a bother, i won't be offended or anything. 
          
          thanks so much! Great job on your story :))

__villanelle

Hey, I'm a new fan and I was wonderig if you could take a look at my story 'The Pretty and The Popular' it would be awesome if you have time!! Please Criticize! I'm in the middle of yours right now. I'm not very good at criticizing, but I will comment and let you know! It's good so far!! Thanks in advance:)