UltraInstinctOmen
Just uploaded the first chapter I've had it finished for a while I just wanted to make sure it good. It is done its short and like a protagonist intro but goid hope you enjoy.
UltraInstinctOmen
cherylnicore
I new I had a feeling about that picture for your profile:) Anyways welcome friend
cherylnicore
@cherylnicore so far is good, just make sure you do it in paragraphs. It might get the reader confuse. And shorten some of your sentence. Make sure there isn't many repition. But, I like how you describe the girl. I think that was cool