I love your story, 'The Yakuza Flower'. It's beautiful and different. Instead of having her go to school and be in the host club, you made her entirely different. I respect and admire your work because it's a wonderful story and I think others would say the same.
@Pudle_duc , I have to agree that 'The Yakuza Flower' is really good. Every story I have found has it where everything in the anime is the same and that makes it not that interesting. I really love how yours does not and it makes me want to keep reading. Also did you come up with the name 'UndertakersDaughter' from watching Black Butler? If so that is where I came up with mine.